Tuesday, October 25, 2011

18th post: write a story.

maria didn't realize it but her father was leaving.
she didn't realize this because he said he would call and that he would visit, but he was lieing and he knew it.
it wasn't that he wanted to leave it was just that he needed to focus on his work.
she smiled as he left but soon felt empty inside.
her father looked back and saw her slowly let her head hang.
he felt sad for doing this to her but he had to. didn't he?
the reality of the fact was though he didn't.
he only wanted to stop fighting with her mother.
he wanted not to be stressed anymore.
so his conscience took over and pretty much decided in order to feel better he needed to leave.
a day past and he hadn't called.
a day turned into two days.
then a week.
then a month.
then a year.
maria waited and waited but he never came back.
he never called.
she now couldn't help but cry every time she thinks of him.
no one really cared though.
mostly because she was good st hiding her feelings.
she understood why they couldn't but she was sad to see no one really knew her. \
soon she just, closed up.
she stopped talking.
she just stopped.
like a clock that doesn't work.
she just layed in bed.
no one knew what to do.
all of them were stupid.
they didn't realize that she was obviously heart broken from being abandoned by someone she loved and knew.
they all just ran around blabbing out these symptoms. 
she stayed like this for a week when out of no where, she felt a hand on her shoulder.
and then she heard  her dad say "hey sweetie."
immediately she got up and hugged him.
she smiled and was happy.

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